final product?
not too sure if the angle needs adjusting before the final render
3d modeling lesson - making a chicken coop
as we did our frist OGR and gotten feedback, we started to learn how to model building in 3D on maya so we started with a chicken coop and here is my progress!
Morning Coyle - so I do think there are a number of issues here to look at: there are issues of quality re. your texturing (for example, the 'underground' sign) and largely unresolved areas like the big expanse of pavement and road (or is it a river?). Your current matte painting is difficult to 'read' in terms of how it's contributing to the sense of space in your scene... put more simply... what am I looking at? The 'grey' potato-stack building on the far left looks unfinished. In terms of scale, the size of the 'kerb' stepping up from the 'road' to the 'pavement' seems massive if you look at the size of the doorways - is this intentional? I think your overall composition is unbalanced - loads of buildings on the right and not much on the left, except for a matte painting... can you reconsider? And finally... what time of day is it here? You'll need to think about the contribution of lighting to this scene and how it can create specific moods. Short version - don't hit the final render button yet! There are issues of quality here I want you to identify and fix before tomorrow.
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